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Reviewed By: Nuku22532 On: June 03, 2006 23:21 CDT
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i luv it plz update!!!!! plz!!! plz!!! pppplzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Well...
Reviewed By: kittycatcharm On: April 27, 2006 17:46 CDT
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All of the suggestions sound pretty much the same. "Revising" would pretty much turn into a re-write, anyway. Just don't delete the old one entirely; I've got it bookmarked, and I'd never find the new one if this one vanished. Either post the "new" one in the same place, or post a link here to the new one. Probably better to get rid of the old chapters, tho, or people will stumble into them and be sad when they realise it doesn't continue.
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Reviewed By: LadyNatureza [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 08:11 CDT
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I think you should just revise the story.
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Title: Well...
Reviewed By: kittycatcharm On: April 25, 2006 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The dialogue is a bit hard to follow sometimes, and some of the explanations are too long and detailed... But the story itself is a really interesting idea. I'm very interested to see how it progresses :) Good work!
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Title: Leaving
Reviewed By: Mika256 On: April 23, 2006 15:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the storyline, thc creativity, and you are very random and original like me.
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Title: Excellent work!
Reviewed By: Athena Wind On: April 22, 2006 10:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! Grammar could be improved, but still fantastic. Please add more Sakura/Sasuke intimate moments.
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Reviewed By: lovely liz On: April 07, 2006 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was a great chapter and i realy realy realy want to know what happen next in the next chapter so update soon i realy like that u add more to the story like vanpirers and made up same more clans too it is realy cool know you need to bring in the bad guys or we like to say the misunderstud foxs hehe in till nex time
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Reviewed By: princess_shirley01 On: April 01, 2006 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey when are you going to update??? its soo good :D remember update!!!
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Title: please
Reviewed By: doreme On: March 31, 2006 15:14 CST
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the story wasn't that good... i've read better... sakura isn't that strong and sasuke isn't that weak. And they would never go out. so i sort of wasted my time reading this fanfic. Really it was pointless and i wish i would have listened to my friend when she said it sucked.
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Title: aWSOME
Reviewed By: ifdyhgir On: March 30, 2006 06:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok it was the total not fairest cliff hanger and if loves sasuke then why is she making out with some dude with eyes like that gross and sasuke is too whimpish i noe the real sasuke would never get jeolus he is just mad he cant have what someone elese has ^^ but huge sakura fan and awsome story!!!
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Title: LadyNatureza
Reviewed By: LadyNatureza [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I check back almost every day to see if it has been updated.
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Title: sweet *starts to cry*
Reviewed By: spookagirl On: March 27, 2006 12:19 CST
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u r a relly good riter. u should updated as soon as possible.
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Reviewed By: super_shinobi_woman On: March 25, 2006 14:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woot!! this is an awesome story!!! i love how the old gang is powerless compared to sakura!! pay back time for how they treated her... this is one fricken awesome story!! please update soon!!!
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Title: pleaz update
Reviewed By: spookagirl On: March 24, 2006 11:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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u r a realy good fanic writer. i love this story.
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Title: Leaving
Reviewed By: Angel 7193 On: March 21, 2006 17:06 CST
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I thought that is the best thing you are wrighting please wright the reast of the story.
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