Title: wow Reviewed By: cat woman aka kistsune lover On: March 18, 2006 18:11 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: wow this is cool but how did she play truth or dare? this is a cool story but the plot is way wierd. why is the person that she is closest to dies. it would mean that yuske would die then her mom and then koenma or something. maybe you should fix the plot because that would make people cry mostly me because i cry when the plot gets sad. well if you want to email me my email is alexandra.barnard@gmail.com gmail is google mail. just thought i would tell you
Title: can I write it? Reviewed By:kik [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 20:30 CST Comment/Review: I just wanted to see if I could reveiw my own work.....
