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"The Orb Of Liberation" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]

Reviewed By: martianbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2010 21:36 CDT
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I was really skeptical when I read the first chapter but I don't mind the fic. It's good, but realize that other characters you create only make it less attractive to readers because they like to read stories about the main characters or usually in the point of view of the main characters. If you were to write it more about Yusuke,then more people would read. Good luck though! I think it's interesting and I like it, but I would encourage you to write more centered around the main characters of the show.

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