| "Wooden Nickels" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Nadene On: September 30, 2007 11:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you update your story soon. I found roughly about a year and a half ago and I have randomly checked up on it to see if you've ever updated. You are very talented and descriptive with your writing. I very much enjoy that you have displayed the personality ignorance of Kagome who comes from a world of false pretentions and silver linings. I see people call her dense and want you to make her change, but I think you are doing it right. We see what Inuyasha thinks, but she does not. Had any of us been in her situations, we would not feel need to trust him either. I hope you continue your story. There are not many fictions on this site as well written as yours.
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Reviewed By: Nikiz bad habit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 13:18 CDT
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this fanfic is unlike any I've read before. I just love your writing style. can't wait to read the next chapter. update soon
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Reviewed By: leapinglord On: April 18, 2006 23:05 CDT
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The girl was kidnapped, okay I get it, but is she even using her brain to realize that Inuyasha is actually protecting her?
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: April 18, 2006 13:47 CDT
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OKay though I feel bad for Kagome, she really has to grow up! The more she escapes the more likely she is going to get hurt, how can she leave Inuyasha after the things that she has witnessed? Is she really that naive to think that noting is going to happen to her on her own?
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Reviewed By: whorl On: April 16, 2006 02:14 CDT
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Your story has such dark undertones, I love it. But how dense can Kagome be? I mean the man put a hole through the wall, you just have to think he is not human or there is something more than a simple kidnapping going on.
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Reviewed By: growling On: April 15, 2006 00:52 CDT
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It's been a while since your last update but at least Inuyasha knows he is drawn to Kag's
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Reviewed By: crystal flower On: April 03, 2006 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is intriguing, and I love that the story is being held in some secret underworld.
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Reviewed By: time just flies On: April 03, 2006 22:33 CDT
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So Inuyasha and Kagomme are starting to get alongnot that well but it's a start I love this story, it is now one of my favorite's
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Reviewed By: redcheeks On: April 02, 2006 01:38 CST
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I really want to know what it is that Kouga is involved in.And why is Inuyasha willing to let her go as long as she does not return to Kouga?
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Reviewed By: hocked on hooch On: March 30, 2006 22:52 CST
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Well I always knew Kouga was a bastard I wonder what it is he did to Inuyasha?
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Reviewed By: whorl On: March 30, 2006 13:39 CST
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Nice, so it turned out to be Inuyasha huh? Sweet!
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Reviewed By: fluffyearedinulvr2 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2006 23:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this is absolutely fabulous. it has been a very very long time since i have read a fanfiction of this quality. youre descriptions are fabulous, characterization is excellent, and the way you used the light throughout the entire second chapter is worthy of the highest literaty merit. great job, keep going, its very good.
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Reviewed By: WOAH! On: March 13, 2006 14:55 CST
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great story! lovely begining, plz update soon!
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