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Title: BEGGING
Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 On: May 21, 2006 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I BEG OF YOU!!! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR SOO LONG FOR THE STORY TO CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M GONNA CRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A LOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!LEASE!!!PLEASE!!! and...Oh. My. God. So good. So good. I can't even describe the elation I felt when I got the notice that this had been updated, and then the even greater elation after reading this chapter. I wish I had some criticism... he might be moving a little too quickly, but somehow that works (cause he's soooo SEXY!). Can't wait till next update! and...just...wow... I really like your story.. I just read the chapter u posed. AHHHH YOU JUST LEFT IT THERE!!??? *sobs uncontrollably* Mother F&*%er! (not you.. just a comment) INUYASHA IS SO DAMN SEXY IT'S NOT EVEN FUNNY!!!! I want him for my birthday, not just a chapter! (but i thank u 4 the chapter ^_^) Luv ya!
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Title: Awestruck
Reviewed By: maelia8 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read all of the chapters of this fanfic and I was incredibly impressed with both your command over plot development and your eye for detail in the enunciation of an AU. For me, an AU must creat a complete world, and I am often disappointed with AU fanfics which leave holes or unexplained passages. But this fic passes my AU test of believability and proper characterization, so kudos to you! This fic is a prime example of the amazing whays in which AUs can be as powerful as the priginal situation, if the plot is properly constructed. I loved that funny little reference to prison guards in Iraq . . . quick, well-punctuated humor is certainly not lost on the astute reader, and, when properly placed, can be a real spicer for a complex fic. I wonder about the tantalizingly teasing bits of IY14's past that you have permitted us to see, although I do have a few questions, such as: How does he have memories when he is a clone, not a reincarnation? And how could he have taken his life with Tensaiga (as he seems to have done from the flashbacks), as it is a sword which cannot kill? I look foreward to finding the answers to these riddles, and any onther intriguing connundrums that you may choose to pose for readers like myself. Thank you for writing this fic! Please update soon!
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Title: Very Good ^_^
Reviewed By: inuyashasramen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 21:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love it so far! It's kind of funny, usually I don't really read these kind of fics. I'm more into just inu/kag, but I'm glad I chose to read this fic. It's awesome! ^_^ I felt so bad for sess in the beginning, they were torturing poor him! But now he's found rin and everythings' alright. I love it! Please continue! Lub, inu's ramen ^_^
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Reviewed By: divapimpstar On: May 10, 2006 03:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story one of a kind ........when will u update.....keep writing!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Jimmy the Gothic Egg [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm just so proud of you. 33 reviews!! You made a bunch of changes apparently, so I'm rereading. I do love this story. You are so original; I could've never thought this up.
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Title: oh god...
Reviewed By: just me On: May 08, 2006 10:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm applauding you here!! i can't believe how good your story is! and so origin! kinda... i love this story and all, but i have one request, which i hope isn't too hard to fullfill: make inu and kago closer, because the way they ae now is just like some distant friends, but i love your story anyway! inu_inu_luvluv
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 12:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go Kagura! Yeah! I thought that was an awesome chapter! :o) wonderful job!! i hope you update soon!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 12:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh most excellent chapter. Love it that Naraku is on the receiving end this time and not Kagura. That's a switch. Wonder what she's gonna do when she finally catches up to their project. Being that he is more aware of things now. Should be most interesting. Awesome story. Update when you can.
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Title: Good Job!
Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 18:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great Job!!! I loved the comment about miroku being a perverted monk in the past.. haha! :o) Its a wonderful story.. so intricate and compelling! I can't wait to see what happens! Update whenever you get a chance!
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Title: BEGGING
Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 On: May 04, 2006 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I BEG OF YOU!!! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR SOO LONG FOR THE STORY TO CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M GONNA CRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A LOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!LEASE!!!PLEASE!!! and...Oh. My. God. So good. So good. I can't even describe the elation I felt when I got the notice that this had been updated, and then the even greater elation after reading this chapter. I wish I had some criticism... they might be moving a little too quickly, but somehow that works. Can't wait till next update! and...wow... I really like your story.. I just read the chapter u posed. AHHHH YOU JUST LEFT IT THERE!!??? *sobs uncontrollably* Mother F&*%er! (not you.. just a comment) INUYASHA AND SESSHY ARE SO DAMN SEXY IT'S NOT EVEN FUNNY!!!! I want them for my birthday! (or at least another chapter) My b- day is May 5th :-D just thought i'd tell you that(*hint hint**wink wink*. And wow.. I wish I was living this story or something.. THEY'RE SO HOT! sorry...I'm better now.. ok I'm gonna go before I start drooling all over my keyboard. Please add more chapters! Lemony even! :-D ok bye Also I usually don't ask writers to hurry up and updte because I beleive it is very rude. But this one time I will be rude. PLEASE update faseer than a month. I don't think I can what that long. Another great chapter by the way.^_^
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, if it cant be helped, I guess it cant. Hope school goes well, then you can get back to your loyal readers :D...Excellent chapter. Was wondering what Miroku was gonna do when he found out. Liked the reminder in there about Shippo being a hanyou. I almost forgot that fact, lol. Love the banter between crew mates as well. All around, great story. And love the art that goes with it. Gives one a better feel for the characters they're reading about. I think so anyways. Again, great story, and update when you can.
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Title: Found you!
Reviewed By: RayGirl (Too lazy too log in) On: May 01, 2006 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found you on mediaminer. It'll be much easier to read your super-sexy-awesome-addictive-wicked story here! ^o^
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Reviewed By: love fluffy On: April 29, 2006 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh thank god i was gonna die from lack of update!!! I like the pictures if i knew how to vote i would have voted u plz contiue its a very good story
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Reviewed By: Lady Orange On: April 29, 2006 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is soooo neat! I lost this fanfic and had given up searching mediaminer for it!!!!!! Thank you so much for writitng this......-Lady Orange
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Title: Excellent story
Reviewed By: Moon Hana [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good story, I like the plot that you created. Very Sci Fi!!! I'm Curious as to what happened to the real Sesshoumaru, and why was his blood on the Tensiaga. Also they characters in the story, are they all reincarnations of the orginal, or did some lived through all that time? Either way, I love it and you have me hooked. Please up date soon. Ciao
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