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Title: Great Job!
Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 12:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Awesome story!! I love the intricacy of the characters and the seeting. I can't wait to see what happens next! I believe your story is like a breath of fresh air... very unique. I am interested to see what past history you will pull into the story. I defintely will continue reading! :o)
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Title: Chapter Six
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 15:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww....I love it! This is so going on my favorites. Good luck with the next chapter!
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Title: Chapter Five
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 15:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't usually like AUs but this fic is brilliant, absolutely brilliant and just what I needed for a nice AU fix! Excellent job!
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Title: Chapter Four
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww...very good action sequence there! I like how you're progressing this story. It's well written and very descriptive. I have one minor nitpick for this chapter. In one of the paragraphs there was a switch from third person narrative to second person narrative. In other words, you should go back and get rid of the "you" narrative and replace it with a third person equivalent. Great job so far!
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Title: Chapter Three
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heeee...this chapter was so cute! I like how you are introducing the characters. Not bad for being AU. Just a couple nitpicks: You might have spelled your chapter title wrong. I think you mean "Truckers" right? And you might want to get rid of the HTML codes. That's probably not your fault since MM has such horrible formatting issues. But it's a great chapter otherwise. Good work!
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Title: Chapter Two
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. I thought it was canon at first but this is an Alternate Universe. It's definitely original and so far I'm very interested. Maybe you could label it AU in case people might need to know that before they read? Up to you. Great chapter again!
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Title: Chapter One
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, so far I like where this is going. I'm a sucker for sci-fi, so I'm glad to find a good fic with that genre. Nice work.
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Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com On: April 10, 2006 09:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
very good story. i really like the plot, its very original.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr NSI On: April 09, 2006 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Am so glad you updated. I like this story. The whole sci-fi of it and yet it has all of our favorites in it as well. Cant wait to see what you come up with next. Update when you can.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2006 23:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, most excellent chapter. This is a very unique story I must say. Love it when I go a-fic-hunting and find a gem, and that's what this story is. Great chapter. Update when you can. Soon hopefully.
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Reviewed By: Inulove On: March 31, 2006 23:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the most interesting stories I've read in a long while. Your setting really reminds me of Cowboy Bebop, but that could just be coincidence. Is this going to be a kag/sess story?
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Title: lord and warrior of all things orange
Reviewed By: Lady Orange On: March 23, 2006 00:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is, wow. I can't explain it, but it definitly is a powerfull fanfic with an extremely unique concept. The spelling and grammar are excellent, and I barely ever give all tens to anybody. Thank you, Lady Orange P.S please update soon.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 02:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, pretty good start ya got here so far. Update when ya can.
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Reviewed By: Jimmy the Gothic Egg [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 00:45 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very interesting. I gotta say, my interest is peaked. I hope you update quick-like, because this is definitely a good story.
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Reviewed By: Elizabeth Hemingway [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2006 20:04 CST
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Vega, Excellent start to a story! I think I might have been hooked just after reading the summary. So concise, and with a very thourough inclusion of background information, just enough so that the reader can still see the story and the beauty of it. A mystery is being unraveled here, and you have my eye! For a prologue, I have to say this is a wonderful continuation of the canon. You have a great way with words, very refreshing. Can't Wait To Read More, EHB
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