Reviewed By: anime_lover_kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 19:22 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: omg it is so good! please continue the story! i love how yo didn't say who the other person was it drove me insane but i loved it! please put the next chapter up soon and please make it longer. oh btw this chapter was off center the words on the left of the screen were cut off, just thought you should know
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