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| "Crimson" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Not FFARG
Reviewed By: Shinashi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 20:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
P.S. I really.. honestly...suggest you to re-release the story and break it up into chapters. It picks a nerve to know that this is the only review... It deserves more, dammit!!
| Title: FFARG
Reviewed By: Shinashi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 20:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow.. First, I would've split this one-shot into chapters. It was... so... wonderful...It would've gotten more attention that way. There were some commas & semi-colons mix-ups. But the electric writing style totally blew any mistakes worth saying. ~-~ Man, that was good reading.. Though, it was a bit confusing when told from Raven's POV, but I'm sure that was for a purpose, ne? Also, but this is just a pet peeve of mine, there was a repitition of pronoun replacements.. Like changeling and leader- But you had to deal with the five Teen Titans over and over so it's normal... Like I said.. Pretty good! :D
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