| "Flight of the Dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: kool!
Reviewed By: ryusagi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 09:57 CDT
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really nice fic! I like! lol keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Whisper Dragon...what's my real name again? On: April 12, 2006 10:17 CDT
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Brave-o, Brave-o. Excellent story kid...if your a kid. i've been waiting for an update for a while and you not only gave me one but two, no three or was it four or five. i don't remember but it was a damn lot. u so rule. props to...uhm...what's your name? can't remember...maybe i'll sign in later and tell you my real name...not that you asked but i don't care...nice fic ...again.
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Title: orangeflips (too lazy to sign in, haha)
Reviewed By: orangeflips [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 12:15 CDT
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Eerrrm, there's no first chapter for some reason. It skips to the fourth chapter... o.o Eep! Fix it quick, so I can read please! :D
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Title: i thought i reviewd this already
Reviewed By: Whisper Dragon On: April 07, 2006 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fic and plot.not really cliche but interesting in its predictability. dont change that plz. can't wait unitl the next update
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Reviewed By: LynnGryphon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 23:41 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I definitly like the idea you're running with for this story. Not too serious not too light, sort of midway. I like that, and I like that it makes a quick read. However, I agree with Davross, a Beta-reader would help big time. Finding a beta to clean up the typos/misspellings/grammar would do be enough to make this story really stand out as a wonderful quick read. Hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: eve4mem On: March 19, 2006 15:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No fair you can't leave it right there, please more soon.
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Reviewed By: Fan of Wufei!! On: March 19, 2006 14:50 CST
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It was good!! so please update soon!!^^ Quatre and Trowa will have Wufei? I want it so please Continueeeeeeeee!!!!
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Reviewed By: Davross On: March 17, 2006 21:03 CST
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I'm really enjoying this story, but I wish you'd get someone to beta it. There's quite a few typos and word choice errors (i.e. "Wufei rapped his arms" rather than "wrapped"). Also, there's no way that a house like that would go so cheaply. A little research really makes the fic a lot more believable. I'm looking forward to the confrontation between Wufei and Q/T!
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Reviewed By: KawaiiJade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 18:23 CST
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Woman what is ur problem....u can't just leave it hanging like that...*nervous laugh* like I can talk... lol Any way. I liked it a lot. I'm gathering u like those pairings? lol I thought so. *smiles* I want more angsty stuff between Heero and Duo...and the threesome peeps... Wu-wu...Tro and Quat...lol I'll be waiting for an update.... Cool Sis
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Reviewed By: Fan of Sanzo On: March 17, 2006 16:18 CST
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I like your story and i'm french !! so please update soon!!^^
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 14:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o0o0o0o! Plot twist! I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon! -Till Then!
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 10:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Ohhhhh......Interesting.....I really wanna know how this ends up. Please posty some more?! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2006 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to see Trowa and Quatre's reaction to Wufei and his partner! They aren't going to be happy! I hope you update this soon! -Till Then!
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