"Of Stupidity And Guilt" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Amaya Embrill [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 17:43 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: I think it was a good idea to make it 1st person, however some of your descriptions got a little vague making a little difficult to follow. Other wise, a rather enjoyable fic.
| Reviewed By: kiori [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 21:34 CST Comment/Review: Not a huge EdxWinry fan but this one is well-written. Thank you for keeping Winry in character!! A lot of EdxWinry fics turn her into some lovestruck ditzy girl and she's really not like that at all. Keep up the good work.
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