| "Secret Confessions" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 22:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
great story... enjoyed reading it... good work... nice job...
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Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. What do you mean no plot? That actually had a real plot that lead up to the lemon. Most just have a little plot and skip to the lemon. It really sounded like the characters. I love that. It was romantic and lemonly good. Keep up the great work. I would love to read more lemons you write...
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Reviewed By: bloodQueen_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man you still got it.for people who like lemons youll love this one!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inuhanyouraerae(not logged in) On: September 07, 2006 09:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY IS F****** AMAZING!!!!!! I can't believe that this isn't one of the most visited stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inugyrl_4sho On: May 29, 2006 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really, really, really, loved it!!! You should keep the story going!!! More, More, More!!!!!
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Reviewed By: REDSILVERDRAGON3 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 21:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Only one problem. When Miroku groped Sango and she yelled out "Itai" she was yelling out "Ouch." Um, not sure if you meant for her to say ouch or something else. Nether the less, great story.
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Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 12:50 CST
Comment/Review:
i looooooved it!! i like long ones. long isant the problem here on mm.short is.ilovedit...(myspacebarisant working right)
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Reviewed By: InuYashaLover69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 23:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Your story is really good so far.I can't wait for the next chapter.
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