| "Surprise" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Dark Jade On: May 28, 2004 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This story has got me hook. I just love a story that make me laugh and make me cheer at fight scenes. I like how you made Ranma as Kenshin's son. Made the story more trilling. You must write more or I will cry from boredom!!
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Reviewed By: Megaman_Alpha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 22:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your spelling is trebltysag pleasedtrsdft tryglhguyd toajlsrhuid fixl;ashjgtor thatla;hgo inasl the;alhg Future;laspdjg;fsdyp. Any rate keep up the good work on the style of the fanfic and update as soon as posible
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Title: Surprise
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 04:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XCELLENT..I hope you continue this cause it if GREAT:D
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Title: surprise
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 04:11 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG...I totally love this i wish you would continue it:d
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 03:50 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVED that 1st chatper....that was FANTASTIC>..LOL>..and that bit w/nadoka...oh man LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT:D
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Reviewed By: C.M Aeris [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2003 02:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Mad: GOODY GOODY FUN FUN!!! (gets dragged off by cm)
Cm: MAD! How many times did I tell you to stay away from Calumon!?
Koganei: Onee-san, Mad onee-san will never learn, why not just give up?
Cm: (shrugs) Continue the story! We almost fell off our chair when we saw Ramna was Kenshin's kid. (blinks and looks over to mad) Well, she fell off mind her.
Mad: (cackles insanely) We must hurt god! (cm rubs temple)
Cm: Koganei! Did you forget to lock up farfarello again?
Koganei: I DID!
Cm: (sighs) See ya! I have a hyperactive hikari to deal with! (drags Mad away again while she waves) |
Reviewed By: Zap On: January 19, 2003 06:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! For once a crossover fanfic I actually LIKE! This is an amazing feat, and I applaud you on your creativity. |
Reviewed By: Skybreeze On: July 09, 2002 13:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been waiting and waiting for this one to come out with more chapters! Please! Ranma and Kenshin are my two favorite people in all of anime and I can't get enough of the two of them together. I like the Hiko insert and am looking forward to seeing some curse action! Also, what will Kenshin's reaction be to how Genma has treated his son? |
Reviewed By: gourrina_chan On: September 03, 2001 02:00 CDT
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This is one of the good one I read so far keep on the good job!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: September 05, 2001 13:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story. It shows a different side to Ranma. I also like the fact that it comments on Akane killing the love that
Ranma may have felt for her. If the relationship
had been reversed and Ranma had beaten on Akane it
is likely he would have gone to jail or been ridiculed. Also, the similarity between Kenshin and Ranma in wanting to protect people was pointed out in a good way. I would be interested in seeing some of the other Ranma characters show up. Ukyou has always been a favorite of mine and I think that she would fit in well, also, she would be able to keep them decently fed. |
