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| "The Creation" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: gigicerisier [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 13:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI, I love your story so much. I just can't wait to read next chapters! I specially love this part
>"Sakura’ Trowa cried in alarm. He had just returned from a mission when he saw the girl falling to her knees. He walked on after noting that nothing was wrong with her. When suddenly the girl began screaming and shouting "NO!" he went to her side. Ever since the girl had come, he felt something different awakening inside him. It had unbalanced him a bit, making him to be more emotional than before. It was unexpected but not unwelcome.
He heh, that's so nice to know he is little bit unbalanced by her. Humm he felt something diffrent awaking inside him? I wonder what it is! Ah... I love all gundam boys in your story!(Ok, maybe not so much Heero...) I love the conversation between Wufei and Duo! They would be best friends would they? but Who ever thought Wufei became Harry and Duo as Draco not other way round? Mind you... I can't imagine Duo became Harry... I think it is impossible since their character is really diffrent... I am really glad that you didn't put Heero as a main character since too many stories are focused on only him when they are cross over fics(Okay... Duo as well... ) You know, Trowa reminds so much Yue. Well, Trowa is not really cold like Yue but his emotionless face reminds so much like him and they are both stunningly beautiful men!! and futhermore, they seems liking both sexes as well.
Yue+Clow/Trowa+Quatre If you don't like yaoi I will apologise. I don't think Trowa reminds Toya even though Yukito reminds so much Yukito! Toya is completely diffrent character from Trowa. He loves teasing his sister a lot and angries a lot while Trowa hardly show anger. Toya is very emotional person. So, I think only similarity between them what I can think of is they are tall and they can do almost anything perfectly. Anyway, Keep writing! I know you are busy person but I hope you will update this superb story soon! Bye
Gigi | Reviewed By: KangaKilla On: April 19, 2002 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey there is no preasure at all, im glad to review it, i can tell you one thing you are one HECK of a writer, i was absolutly captivated, i was a little confused what with the visions and things but wow, a way to start a fic, hell im absolutly envious of you hehehe ok well i know i cant write for crap but hey i like to dream. anyway i want to read the next chap and i want to know more about the charecters, i know who Sakura is but the others i havent, prolly anothe anime correct? anyway keep writing i give this a thumbs up!! nice graphics as well. |
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