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| "Distorted Perception" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: rinjin On: December 02, 2006 07:13 CST
Comment/Review:
really sweet =]
| Reviewed By: Devious Lil Devil On: April 10, 2006 03:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was so great. this is one of my fav pairings from this fandom and you brought it to life beautifully. i loved all of your characterizations. shera's was hilarious. wonderful work. i love to see more of this pairing from you.
| Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 18:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Ayya! I can't believe you stopped there! I noticed you messed around with the game a little, like the fact that Aries is still alive when they kill of Sephiroth. It was interesting to see that you did that, and I can't help but wonder why you did it other then the fact that she helped Vinny and Cloud. And is most likely in the future going to help them some more. When I was reading the part where Vincent got rapped by Hojo and then Sephiroth, I was highly inspired to write a poem, and so I did. You did a great job on the imagery and the details, so that I could actually see it in my head. And...That's kind of sickening now that I think about it. I was highly distressed when Vincent kept getting rapped, but I didn't stop reading in hope that this story would end happily. I can't wait to read your next chapter and see how it ends. Here is teh poem by the way, hope you're not totaly mad at me for buturing your story with it. Ja! In the Name of Science Snow white skin, a graveyard tan Colored with the red of blood Cold and shivering against the floor Eyes regarding with unchecked malice Black hair contrasts against skin Knees pulled up to the chest Back against cold, unfeeling wall Futile attempt at best Voice gives out as blade slides in No more screaming is done Wild attempts at getting free But only a smile graces his lips Original is dead, all along Replacement is made, held strong A lover seeks, pain all gone Hidden in folds of shadow and cloth
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