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| "To Follow The Ten Thousand Yen Horse" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Angel Demon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2009 11:57 CDT
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Well, I was surprised to find this story, and others, on fanfiction.net...I read all of the chapters of this story that you posted there. I also read the X-Men and Ranma crossover you wrote. I loved it! You did a great job!
| Title: Hi!
Reviewed By: Angel Demon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 12:52 CDT
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Well, if I had to guess, I'd have to agree with the guesses of the other two. The invisible spring, the invisible man spring, or the chameleon spring....but anyway, it's stupid to hold a chapter until someone guesses the right answer. If these are wrong, what will you do if nobody guesses correctly? Anyway, good job on the chapter. I like Kinma already! Keep upt the good work!
| Reviewed By: serenia_sd [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 18:07 CDT
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This was fun. I don't understand why you didn't posted chapter 2 since you had it already written. Anyway I'm very curios about Kinma's curse. The most obvious would be the invisible man spring, but in the spirit of thinking new things… First I thought it could be something live a chameleon that blended so well that was actually unnoticeable, or maybe something so small that was impossible to see by the naked eye unless you actually knew that he was there. But then you said that when splashed with water you could see the figure of a man so that nullifies both my theories. I don't know maybe he fell into the cursed spring of the glass man… jaja I mean if we can think of an invisible man why not think of a man made of glass and that others can see thru him. Then again glass is not really invisible and the Tendo's would have seen at least something. Hey! now that I think about it I get that he can't be seen because he is curse and changes into SOMETHING but what about his clothes? Doe's he walk around naked? He had clothes outside the bathroom, those he could have left for after his bath, but what at the end when his dad threw him into the pond? Well I'll leave you now cause these has gotten awfully long for a review. Bye Take care.
| Reviewed By: Anaki Of The Blood Wolves [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 23:24 CDT
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This is awesome, and for the sake of getting you to update I think I'll say he fell into the spring of invisible man, or maybe the invisible spring in gemeral. I dunno, but update a.s.a.p!
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