| "a bet with in a deal" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2007 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleae not have abandoned this story if you did im gonna scream please keep going
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Reviewed By: 1love13 On: April 08, 2007 20:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome story please WRITE MORE !!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas_girl_kagome2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 10:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hate kikyo shes a bitch anyway kept writing
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: suikidoen On: July 11, 2006 10:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I give youa 10 in evry thing i love this fic! Kikyou's baby daddi is shesshy-kun O.o! I love that twist.If she lived she would get a way with it too the baby would be hanyou and they wouldnt be able to tell the diff!You must continue!!No matter what! even if u get dumass flamers!!!
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Title: LUV IT PLEASE WRITE MORE!!
Reviewed By: Kawii-Love [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 11:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LUV THE STORY!! IS KIKYO'S BABY FROM SESSHY?! I THINK IT IS??? WHO NOWZ KEEP UP DA GUD WORK
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Reviewed By: alakab4m On: April 05, 2006 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED THIS STORY!!! A LOT! there was so much passion etc. this was one of the best stories i ever read. write more! it was sooo enjoyable and thrilling.
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Reviewed By: Fairytalechic1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 03:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love your story. It's funny, sexy, audacious, and . . . very emotional. Your characters are a bit unexpected, but equally interesting. Great job, can't wait for review!
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Reviewed By: Kaori_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 21:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Please update soon.
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Title: a bet with in a deal
Reviewed By: darkagome On: March 27, 2006 08:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
like the story hop for me and is inuyasha half-brother kilko baby father. can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 08:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn Kinky-hoe waz infact a kinky hoe.Glad shes righting her wrongs. So Fluffys her babies daddy. Wasn't expecting that.What did InuYasha just let it happen?I don't know if thats nice or perverted.Please update.
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Reviewed By: hanyou_swimmer (nsi) On: March 23, 2006 03:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not sure how to write this without it coming out as a flame, because its not. Let me first of all say that I love your plot, its really good and you show a lot of creativity in it. However, you do really need to work on grammar and spelling. Also adding a little bit more character development wouldn't hurt. If you need a beta, feel free to email me at hanyou_swimmer@yahoo.com and i'll be happy to help you out. You really are a good author and you have an amazing story outline, but that is underminded by the grammar problems. Many of the fanfiction readers I talk to won't read stories if they have a lot of grammatical problems and I would hate for your story to be passed up because of something like that. ~hanyou_swimmer
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 19:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story, i wish you to update again soon, this is REALLY good stuff!
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Title: GinaCat
Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 17:13 CST
Comment/Review:
I love this story I can't wait till you update
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Reviewed By: heyladies On: March 21, 2006 14:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't believe no one has reviewed this yet. it is a pretty good fic. i like it and would like to know where it is going. (i can't remember but it think it was this one) i think you miss spelled gentle several times as genital. which alot of people tend to do. it gets a little cheezy at times but it is alot better than most people's efforts at fan fics. lot of good potential.
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