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| "The Journey" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I can't believe I didn't read this story before now... I'm honestly not a Kaoru-protagonist fan, but this is very nicely done. I absolutely ADORE the plot twist of a homebody Kenshin chasing a wandering-Kaoru, for once... and the kiss on Kenshin's cheek, go Kaoru, w00t! I can't wait to see where this adventure goes! Please update soon, ok?! :)
| Title: FFRG Review - Prologue
Reviewed By: hostilecrayon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 05:31 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting beginning. It's just the right length for a prologue, and it has that element of wonder as to what exactly she's thinking about. You have a good grasp of first person writing, though I did notice that you contradicted your use of present tense in the first sentance. It perks my interest, and you have a good grasp of diction. Thank you for submitting to FFRG!
| Reviewed By: Lacrymosa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 19:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story, you have a really good grasp on the characters. I have never really like hearing things from Kaoru's point of view (1st person) not in the manga or in Seisouhen. But I think you did this perfectly, I don't even mind the fact that it's in first person, I like the way Kaoru thinks in this fanfic. Please keep updating this Fanfic, this is one of the good quality RuroKen fanfics on mm.org that I have found. Keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: Cherrysinger [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!! This is incredibly funny, but at the same time deep, which I love. That old, decrepit Kaoru/Kenshin/Yahiko scene Kaoru was imagining was HILARIOUS. I loved it so much, couldn't stop laughing. It sounds exactly like the dumb, random things I talk about with my friends. Great job! Keep going! (and please, god, update soon) ...Oh yeah, before I forget, don't be disappointed by the overall rating..I'm not wont to give a perfect blindly like most people. A story has to be absolutely perfect for me to do that, and hey, you're pretty close!
| Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I just looove this story. It's so well written! I feel so bad that Kaoru feels that she is not adequate enough, hmm, sounds awfully familiar. Her and that Kenshin sure are a pair. I thought the scene with Kenshin holding Kaoru's hand was so tender and spoke volumes *swoon* I am so jealous, rawr. I really enjoyed the Kenshin chapter, it's nice to see him pining away after her as well. I'm excited for him following her. It's all very delectable. I love this story and I can't wait until your next update! ;)
| Title: Awesomeness!
Reviewed By: I8Cait On: July 22, 2006 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! I keep meaning to leave you a note, because I adore this story, and after this last chapter I couldn't resist! I love watching people torture Kenshin and Kaoru, and can't wait for Kenshin to catch up to her. Til next time! Cait
| Reviewed By: EmeraldFoxTears [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 11:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I absolutely loved your fanfic. It brought tears to my eyes, a characters conflict with themselves always does that to me, (well if it's sad) and how you described all the events was very wonderful. I would however BEG YOU TO PLEASE UPDATE!!!! And maybe once in a while, go back to the Kamiya dojo and show how Kenshin and Yahiko are doing. Does Miss Megumi hear wind of what Miss Kaoru is doing? But still, I love it, I love how you show the conflict Kenshin has with himself as he calls himself "unworthy one" it really shows just how much his past still haunts, and probably always will haunt him. Looking forward to more undates!
| Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay... your pattern of updates shows you used to update about once every month or so... so here is my question... Is everything okay?... If something is going on that is preventing you to update people would want to know and they might also be able to help you I mean there are a LOT of people who LOVE your writing, and I personally think that you should change the names of the characters and have the book published... but that's just me
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