"Shikon No Tama Tennis Acadame" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 16:13 CST Comment/Review: Chapter 1: You need to work on your grammar and spelling, but this is a really good story. I'm just wondering who the agent is, and why Kagome wouldn't be at least a little annoyed that she 'betrayed' her.
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Title: Its me the Author Reviewed By: miko_53 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 11:04 CDT Comment/Review: Ok people this will not be updated for a very long time because my computer is borken and I cant save work on my fathers computer nor can I really use it, he doesnt know that Im using it right now sssshhhhh dont tell him, he will be mad, or mabey he wont neways bi
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Title: me like Reviewed By: ChicaBonita On: April 24, 2006 14:25 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: hmmm...me like. i like the way its flowing so far. keep it up!
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Title: this is from her adviser vikki Reviewed By: miko_53 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 15:51 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: ok ppl its me the adviser that is not paid and was never really hired!!!As for the hired thing umm im doing kimiko-chan a total favour cause well i correct her ,give her authorly advise and i'll kick her ass if she doesn't finish this!!umm right now kimiko-chan is yelling hitting me with a pillow and well being kimiko-chan(throwing hissy fits like kagome) :) woah shes mad now she screaming into her pillow!!things are getting messy .....umm i think im going to get to the reveiw part before she kills me !!!!!!I love this story its soo funny and diffrent ....umm kimiko-chan is good at playing kagome well cause i swear shes like kagome (its sorta creepy)!any ways im out of here ! :) loves always vikki:) p.s. write reveiws cause she'll be soo depressed then the fic well go down hill from here !!KIMIKO IF YOU DONT FINISH THIS I CAN AND WILL KICK YOUR ASS!!!!!!!!!!!!! sincerly your your unhired (doing a favour)and unpaid advisor!Vikki
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Title: GinaCat Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 00:47 CST Comment/Review: I like it it is so cute I can't wait till you update
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