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"Secrets Past, Secrets Present" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ]
 Reviewed By: crc31789@hotmail.com  On: August 24, 2006 22:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh. That's you! I didn't look to see who the author was when I started reading this. It's a story I bookmarked to read later a long time ago. I HAVE read some of your other stuff. You are a good writer :)
 Reviewed By: crc31789@hotmail.com  On: August 24, 2006 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I always hate putting perfect tens when I rate things, but I really enjoyed this story and I didn't see anything wrong with it. Well, I felt like Sango was a little out of character, in that she had sex with him. Rumiko created a cast of women with morals--probably because it'd be inappropriate to write a manga with a lot of sex in it? I don't know. But it's a part of her characters nonetheless... Sango's the kind of girl that I think would wait, unless the circumstances motivated her to do otherwise. Eh. But I guess I don't have so much of a problem with it in this story. This is a pairing that I never would have thought about but I think it's a good pairing just the same. I like the background you created for them. It brought them together quite nicely. They have chemistry. I can actually see their personalities fitting together. And I think you did a really good job getting into Kouga's head. I think since he was the one that went and found her that it was a good choice to do it from his point of view. This is something I would like to see more of, if you have any interest in continuing it. It works as a one-shot but I can also imagine it being a whole story focusing on them. It would be interesting and probably really good as well. You seem to be a pretty good writer, I'm going to check to see if you've got any other fanfictions I can read!
 Title: VERY INTERESTING
Reviewed By: DeepSerenity(DeepSin)  On: March 25, 2006 20:31 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well i LOVE Sango, and I REALLY like Kouga....so I'd have to say I LOVE THIS story. I'm tired cause I just got off a 12 hour shift so I can't be to indepth here, but I'm a fan who follows and has read all your work except a recent yaoi fic(which I will do when I'm in the mood for it). This has promise. I like that it's all in the males memory and I like his charaterzation. Very very good start.
 Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 21, 2006 17:15 CST
Comment/Review:
awesome!
 Reviewed By: velvetarms77 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 21, 2006 13:31 CST
Comment/Review:
that was great, Wheez! I like how you expanded it, and the tense changes weren't too confusing. There were a couple of points where I thought that the tense should be past when it was present (the text was in italics), but it wasn't detrimental to the story. It was interesting how Sango would give her virginity to Kouga like that, almost like it was payback (she likes to use her body as payback, doesn't she? Shades of Youkai + Exterminator). Anyhow, that was hot. Kouga needs more nookie so we can think about him all naked, with his muscles bunching and flexing...... *droooooooooool* Sorry, zoned off for a minute! Anyhow, I loved it! ^__~
 Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 21, 2006 10:56 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow, that was amazing and I loved the switch from past to present tense and it all made perfect sense. Truly an excellent piece and another alt pairing to add to my GROWING collection of alt pairing fics I've truly enjoyed. Excellent work! ~~Ang
 Reviewed By: hiei and the cherry  On: March 21, 2006 09:24 CST
Comment/Review:
awesome as ever. the tenses seemed to work beautifully and even though ive never actually senea a snago/kouga pairing...you played it off really well. CONGRATS! :)
 Title: Interesting...
Reviewed By: MIdnightsKeeper (not signed in)  On: March 20, 2006 23:44 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i don't usually like anything except canon, but i like your writing enough to enjoy this. and yes, your experiment here was sucessful. at least it was for me. i like the style too. it's almost like reading two stories at once and that is something i enjoy seeing in people's works. good job and keep writing. especially possession. i know you must get nagged about it all the time and that probably drives you insane, but i couldn't help but say something. i love that story. 'til next time!
 Reviewed By: leila-chan *nsi*  On: March 20, 2006 23:29 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i really like this pairing of sango and kouga. you pulled this piece together so very nicely. their past together made their being 'together' in the present easy to believe. that they might have a chance to be open about things after naraku is defeated is awesome. so sweet that they will wait and not forget. i thought that having her father be the one to let him get away from the humans was an excellent touch. you posting so often is spoiling us fans! thanks!!

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