| "You Choose or I Do" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: silverarrow42 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2009 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story! Although, your Author's Note says you might not update until Thanksgiving, but that was almost 4 years ago. So, I'm guessing you've dropped this story. Sad, because I really wanted to know what happened next. Especially with the Homunculus and Dante, as well as Ed's reaction to them being his "family". Had a few spelling errors that could have easily been fixed just by proofreading, but other than that it was very fun to read.
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Reviewed By: yondaime56 On: July 08, 2007 14:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awsome!!! Please continue with the story!!!
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: Xxmoonlit-UchihaxX [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i luv this story so far plz write more soon
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 19:20 CST
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i just read ur story. its really good. i luv edroy!! but u said that u would want 2 update this by thanksgiving & that was 2 dy ago. i hope u update this soon.
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Title: Can`t wait
Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 17:08 CST
Comment/Review:
I just read your update. I have put you on my list so that I can be notified when you do update. Don`t push it or it won`t be as good as what you have already done. I don`t like seeing that in a talented writer and you are one. Your idea is intriguing and I was hoping that you would think about letting me use it? Or rather one of them. I would like the use of the idea of the humonculous being on Ed`s side and not against him. You can e-mail with your answer, or can post it in the next chapter if you don`t have time. anubiset@sbcglobal.net
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Title: more
Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 20:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can`t wait to see where this goes. I have never read one like this. I love the idea of the humonculous protecting Ed. I also love how many plots are in this story. Please finish this.
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: Yami_hime [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 04:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write another chapter!!! I'm dying here!!
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Reviewed By: Tory [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 12:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
The story was alright, but it seems to have losts its hold on me when I was starting to figure out it was between Roy and Ed...anyways, its alright, I just wish it was Roy and Ed, but still, keep up the good writting.
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