| "Waking" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: kai28 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 01:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
by the way keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: kai28 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your type of writing is very interesting but a bit hard to understand for some people thats what a friend of mine says
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Reviewed By: seifumeigetsu On: June 17, 2006 09:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story for its complexity, and the amount of time and effort you obviously put into it. It's an exploration of "what could have been." I like how you switch PoV to capture so many different angles of this story. I adore the depth of said characters. I don't know why people don't respond, but I suspect it's laziness. :) Get a bunch of people to rec. your fic and the problem may be solved. ~_^ I think this story would be better appreciated on ff.net (with all of your other stories)...so hurry up and finish it! :) And then edit those smut scenes. :) Like this story loads. Hope to read more of it soon!
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Reviewed By: Ceer Uchiwa [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 05:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not much to critisize anyway... you are good, you should update soon so i will not have to hurt you. I reccomend, though, that at least a little more detail be put in? I still think it is great even as it is.
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Reviewed By: bbbaby On: April 05, 2006 07:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story.
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Reviewed By: stuffies On: March 31, 2006 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was pretty cool...but i want so much more! this story is way too short. but you write good. i wanna read more.
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