"First Attempts Are Not Always Pretty" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: ENTERTAINING Reviewed By: Purple Sumire [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2008 01:49 CDT Comment/Review: very entertaining! :)
| Reviewed By: Aruka [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 13:36 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: I can almost imagine Umi fumbling on his robes... sometimes I wonder how long it takes Clef to get in and out of that, although I'm sure he magically puts them on and off him anyway. T'was tamed, but good. Other than the idea of sex, this can also be rated T, since it's not that explicit.
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