| "Remember to Brush Daily" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Kaitlyn On: July 14, 2008 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was overall the best one-shot I've read in the past few months! It was very creative although I was disappointed that it was so short! You deffinately have a gift and this was extremely enjoyable to read. ^___^ Also I must compliment you on your ending with Inuyasha, I nearly busted out laughing!
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 01:57 CDT
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LOL Hey guess what? I noticed the google ads at the bottom were electric toothbrush ads and it struck me funny...hahaha! Gotta love the wee hours of the morning that make you slap-happy!
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Reviewed By: Jazka On: December 28, 2006 01:22 CST
Comment/Review:
LOL!
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Reviewed By: EdoxFan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OmehGod i loved this fic especially the very last part that inu says, it makes you think weather that it was the imaginary inu or the real one doing all that to here ^^ lol
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Title: Inu Youkai Wanna Be
Reviewed By: Bethany On: March 29, 2006 13:31 CST
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Okay, this is the last time I trying this (sorry for all the defective reviews) I forgot to say, this story really leaves a lot to the imagination, since you left it at such a point. It varies on what could happen. A) Kagome faints out of embarrassment B) Kagome tries to explain herself C) Kagome is too shocked to do anything D) Inuyasha jumps her unexpectedly E) None of the above Very interesting, ne? I think it could make a very good story if anyone ever decides to write it... Also, I think if Inuyasha jumped her (without saying anything about certain "feelings"), Kagome might feel a little used... (Of course, what girl wouldn't -- ignore me rabid fan girls!) But very good story: Inuyasha sees Kagome doing "private things" with her "imaginary Inuyasha friend." Inuyasha jumps her. Kagome thinks she being exploited. They work it out (of course)! XD Okay, I'm done now
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Title: Inu Youkai Wanna Be
Reviewed By: Bethany On: March 29, 2006 13:28 CST
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That's weird, I wanted my color dark blue, not my entire review! Grrr... What I was trying to put is: >blue
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Title: Inu Youkai Wanna Be
Reviewed By: Bethany On: March 29, 2006 13:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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>dark blue
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Title: Inu Youkai Wanna Be
Reviewed By: Bethany On: March 29, 2006 12:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh, I feel so sorry for Kagome! How totally and utterly embarrassing! Yet, so funny! Two thumbs up!
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Reviewed By: JT On: March 28, 2006 19:01 CST
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Masturbating to linkin park huh? Well I guess thats good enough mood music.
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Reviewed By: FluffyKirara [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 19:35 CST
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lol really funny i loved it what completed my story is there were toohbrush adds at the bottom of the page!!!! i just about died laughing!!!!! /checks pulse/ up still alive.. but now u have to write a sequle
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Reviewed By: snicker On: March 26, 2006 12:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great 'lemon' and I laughed out loud at the end. LOL That was great. Snowfall
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Reviewed By: WakingMemory On: March 24, 2006 06:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HUHUH that was soooo funny i feel really sorry for Kagome,how embarassing. Make a sequal to this oneshot I wanna know what happened next.....
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Title: IMAGINAERY?
Reviewed By: inuyashasloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 12:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, now this was just something else, lmao. Brush daily, huh? Oh yea! Makes me wonder if all those * imaginary * feelings from InuYasha were exactly that, IMAGINAERY! This was really good.
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Reviewed By: yugiohgirl03 (unable to sign in stupid comp) On: March 22, 2006 08:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is perfect...especially the end...poor kagome...time to get jumped
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