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| "Lucky 13" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Wat For Stars* On: April 13, 2006 17:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey! Cliffhangars! ARGH! I may enjoy leaving cliffhangars, but I don't enjoy being subject to one! You are mean! But you DID update all 3 of your stories in one day... So I suppose I'll allow you to live! ...for now... jkjk ...Or am I? You never know!Hey, gamehead1777, READ CHAPTER 2! >.< lol But okay, yeah. Much love to ya! I'm sure you're tired of my writing that...Oh wait..It's YOU! lol You'll never tire of recieving love... Anywayz...I'M IN THE STORY! WOOT-AGAIN-AGAIN! That's right, hoes! I'M IN DA STORRRAY! MUAHAHAHAHAHA! Yep, I IS STAR! lmao Luv Shadow 14, who needs to READ THIS!!!!!!, is Amy! lol I'm in a story! I'm in a story! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I win, y'all lose! Damn... More people gotta read this! And REVIEW! It's so good! Okay, so that was a major UNDERstatement! But I'm doing other things... Excuses...should only be noticed if they're true! And that one is! lol Too...many...friends! GAK! *dies*
| Title: if you can tell me
Reviewed By: gamehead1777 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i realy did not get the story can you please tell tell whats it realy about. i mean read your disription but it said some thing about cream the rabbit when read the story i did not see anything about cream the rabbit
| Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Tails11 On: March 28, 2006 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An excellant beggining, I must say. I'm very curious as to what Josh did to annoy Lady Luck. I also like your talking about L.L. as a real person. It makes the story more interesting. I am anxious to read your next chapter!
| Reviewed By: Watch 4 Stars On: March 23, 2006 08:31 CST
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*jaw drop* Holy cow, Josh! So far, you've managed to capture yourself wonderfully! *crickets* Heh... ^_^;; Yeah, it was a bad joke... DEAL WITH IT! I'm guessing that her step-dad is good 'ol Vector, huh? I may be wrong, but *points finger in the air for dramatic effect* I HAVE THE AMAZING POWER OF GUESSTIMATION! lol Yeah, I'm special. We all know this, yes? Hmm...It dislpeleases me that Amy's the only one who's reviewed so far... *shrugs* You'll convince people somehow, Josh. We may just put this IN Reality Check, and I mean IN it! lol Give Cream the shock of her life, eh? And a good reason for Tails to hate you! lol jk But we could do it... 0.o Rambling? Meh, I guess I am. ^_^; Oh well, you do the same, as you wrote in the story. Yes, that was my clever little way to turn the point of this review bac to your story, Lucky 13, which is brilliant so far, as are all of your writings. ~_^ It was a lil confusing, but that's just because it's the prologue. Some of the stuff you wrote leaves one guessing, so you'd better update! If I'm going to use my *points finger in the air for dramatic effect* AMAZING POWERS OF GUESSTIMATION! I need something to see if I'm correct in my assumptions or not. I've just realized that so far this reviews either stupid or intelligent... *shrugs* I'm wierd like that, as you very well know. I'm also being eaten up with curiosity. After your review on A Single Mistake, and after reading your e-mail, which did creep me out a lil bit, I'm intrigued and curious. ^_^;; I'm gonna stop now before I confuse you and myself any longer.... UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ...Please?
| Title: LOL
Reviewed By: Luv Shadow 14* On: March 23, 2006 07:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ALL 10'S! YAYZ! LOL SORRY... I CAN'T HELP BUT LAUGH... I MUST BE IN A GOOD MOOD TO BE LAUGHING AT THIS EARLY IN THE MORNING... OF COURSE, IT'S ONLY 9:00... OH WELL... LOL BUT HEY, THIS IS A GOOD STORY SO FAR... FIRST I THOUGHT YOU WERE TALKING ABOUT ONE OF THE SONIC CHARACTERS TIL I GOT TO THE PART IT SAID YOUR NAME! o.O; LOL BUT IT'S STILL GOOD! YAYZ! SEX... LOL SORRY... OH WELL... LOL GOOD STORY SO FAR! CAN'T WAIT FOR "MORE"... LOL BYES! ~lUV SHADOW 14~ ;)
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