| "To have feeling for you and I might lose you" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: unamed critic. On: March 04, 2007 19:04 CST
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you have a nice idea for the story but the face that the dialouge isn`t seperated & lack of complex sentence stucture is killing me. please please please do something about it.
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed it. It is nice to see Sess being 'HUMAN' ^__^ HAHAHAHA!!!!! Great chapter until the next time~ B reading U!
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 14:32 CDT
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I want to know everything that happend in Rin's past.And who is Midnight? I would love to go to Disneyland right now!!!!!!!! Great Story
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Reviewed By: stickpersonkiller [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 12:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a good story, but I only got a little bit through it before the grammar got to me. I think if you cleaned up the grammar a little bit more it would become an easier read. Other than that it was good!
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 17:17 CDT
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Who is Rin talking to in the mirror. What happen in her past that made her run away from it and start a new life.Please update soon I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPEN IN RIN'S PAST.
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Title: 11 chapters in 1 day!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found your story and it's fabulous. I'm enjoying it throughly! It's great! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I'm putting it in my favorites to keep up with it. Keep up the good work!~B reading U!
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 16:07 CDT
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I suprised Sesshy is letting Rin go by herself.Is he going to follow her? OHHHHHHHHH Please write a new chapter sooon!
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Reviewed By: midnights On: June 27, 2006 02:08 CDT
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I love your story.please try to update more. did kane had something with sara? why didshe marry? Riley is he a good or evil person? when is sesshoumaru going to tell Rin what are his feelings? please update more :D
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 17:55 CDT
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They ended up going to the same place. That is hella funny. OMG please write the next chapter soon because I really want to find out how their going to work this thing out.
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 09:04 CDT
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWW! That was hecka sweet. He's taking her to Italy and what plan does Rin's father have. O please write the next chapter soon I want to know what Sesshy feelings are! This is one of my favorites now!
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 10:03 CDT
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I want to know where he is taking her. OOOOOOHHHHH I can't wait till the next chapter. What up with that dude taking about he's going to tell Kagome's dad that her and Inuyasha have been using the penthouse.
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 02:25 CDT
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Poor Rin! She's knows she likes maybe loves Sesshy but he doesn't know how he feels for her. Pleae write a new chapter soon!!!!!!!!!!^@^
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 11:31 CDT
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I'm your first review. YEAH!^@^ THE STORY SOUNDS GREAT.AND I'M INTERSTED IN FINDING OUT WHAT NARAKU WANTS WITH RIN.
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