| "Ranma Universe: Alpha and Omega" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: shadowalker666 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2009 18:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
An good and interesting story that i am enjoying a lot. I hope you update soon and a bit more often
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Reviewed By: nikichan On: July 01, 2008 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. I think it's really great. But, why do you have chapters 16 + 17 as the same thing? Please correct this and update soon. Bye!
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Reviewed By: pspmario On: May 29, 2008 13:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this little plot of yours although it does seem kinda "forced" but still nothing that seems out of place for nermia!
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Title: Alternate Universe Tag
Reviewed By: Tai Khan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 09:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Akane has been replaced by a pod-person her character's been so heavily altered. BIG mistake mentioning the Reversal (Contrary) Jewel episode. Like many others, you use this as a basis for evidence of Akane's feelings for Ranma...while completely ignoring that Shampoo's love of Ranma was also proven by that episode, which is one of the reasons it's best to ignore the episode completely if you're not going to treat it objectively and without bias. As I am not one to favor the Ranma/Akane pairing, the heavy alteration of her character and the blatant bias of the set-up before the Fiancee Battle...renders the story unenjoyable for me, as I can easily see how it's going to end (and that without even finishing the first chapter). May as well just get the two married and move on to the aftermath.
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Title: inyo
Reviewed By: inyo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 16:23 CST
Comment/Review:
ia was awesome keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: goku90504 B On: March 23, 2006 12:28 CST
Comment/Review:
akane is getting off way to easy she had a realitivly normal child hood she should have been more understanding of ranma's situation instead she abused him im not saying ranma's a saint either but he honestly tried his best where akane almost never tried (she did try a few times but almost never putting her all into it)
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