| "Killing Time" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: monykkka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 08:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uber splendid!! thank you for the laughter it was royal baby!!
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Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 16:00 CDT
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That was a hilarious story. Amongst everything that you wrote, I found it especially amusing to see the stomach grumbles written out as speech. That was priceless.
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Reviewed By: kljlkj On: December 25, 2006 01:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story. Loved it!
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Reviewed By: Tahra On: September 08, 2006 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked your fanfiction a lot! Maybe you could read mine and tell me what you think? If so they are: 1-Love Knows No Bounds 2-Demon Child (sequel to Love Knows No Bounds)
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Title: Review for all chapters
Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: June 17, 2006 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, Just read the story...And I nearly had an asthma attack from laughing so hard, so long!! That was priceless Literary Goddess!! I loved it!! What talent you have!! That was awesome!!chap 1-You answered one of my questions. What does Inuyasha think after he smacks Myouga on his nose? I wonder what Life Insurance that flea has? And Wow! Totosai had manage a full coherent sentence! giggles madly. he called Inuyasha "little one"!! chokes on laughter for a moment! chap 2- And when Inuyasha said "f***" and Sesshoumaru reactions that was hilairious!! You added sound effects for Sesshoumaru's stomach!! wheezes this time in her laughter. That was priceless the tangent that Inuyasha went on about body functions and nearly breaking his tree doing it. "acid reflux"-The mystery has been solved for why we never see Sesshoumaru eating!! A question though.. Where did Inuyasha get the baseball cap if he is in the Feudal era? Chap 3-And that was just really creepy! Sesshoumaru sleeping with his eyes opened. cringes. Sesshoumaru is just jealous of Inuyasha's ears and the attention they recieve from all the fans. Sesshoumaru stomped on Myouga!!! Cooolll!! should we be scared? He is acting almost Inuyasha-ist... They are bonding!! How Kawaii!! I just had a flash back to Bill Crosby skit about brothers hitting each other then one poke the other in the eye when I read about Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru shoving each other over the boulder. chap 4- Okay... the bit about the rabbit and dog fight over the "chew toy" was quite descriptive!! I can just see Rumiko sitting down and drawing up thsi story for her own deviant pleasure!! You rock!! Oh my gawd!! I loved it!! They finally de-evloved to the point of Dad liked you best!! That is awesome!! What a story!! What sibling bonding!! Oh.. my.. MY!! GOD!! They aren't...!! They won't...!! Why is it that Kirara and Ah-Uhn both thought they were being stupid... Never mind they both are females... chokes, wheezes and gasps while laughing hysterically. I loved Totosai's escape method!! I always thought Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru were too hot stuff but to be actually singed from it... chuckles.. That was beauiful!! I really enjoyed it and all perfectly Takahashi-ist!!! Please keep up the most excellent work.
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Reviewed By: leian [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 05:14 CDT
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pescetarian -- I had to look it up! ^_^ Thanks for the laughs!
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Reviewed By: Amara Anon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 23:29 CDT
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Wow, that just turned plain wrong and disturbing at the end. XD
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Reviewed By: Amara Anon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 23:09 CDT
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I laughed out loud at that line Inuyasha thought, "love you too, asshole" about Sesshomaru. On to read the 2nd chapter...
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I went-a-fic-hunting, again, and found this one. And was not disappointed in the least. This was great. Got to chapter two, and LMAO so hard... I really liked this a lot.
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Reviewed By: VanillaAoi On: March 24, 2006 00:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Sesshoumaru! I loved every bit of this.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 17:03 CST
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ENjoyed this mightily especially when Sess was feigning that he knew what a Baseball Stadium was.
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