| "The Way We Feel" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 11:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good start to the story. I like it a lot. I'm looking forward to your next chapter! :D
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Reviewed By: sassy_child [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 18:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love it so far. I especially like how the woman's cries interrupted them. That always seems to happen, doen't it? Once again, love the set-up, could lead to something even better, ne?
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Title: ok
Reviewed By: 1000236584 On: April 03, 2006 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you did great just don't make inuyasha sound like a country be remember that he is very rude and stubborn.
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Reviewed By: GuardianOfTheShikon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 23:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the start of a realy great story from my point of view. Although I have no idea what the story is about. Maybe next chapter you could write what happened to cause the argument. To sum it up, it sounded great.
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