Reviewed By: ~sa - ME On: March 26, 2006 13:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Good so far ^_^ Yes -- more detailed would be good: more how things feel, more emotional investment, maybe how this in new to both of them? maybe not so much 'Inuyasha smirking':) but I think you've got 'great bones', so to speak, for a really good 'real'lemon as opposed to Inuyasha's vague, dreamy citrus fruit ^_^ Can't wait for your next update!
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