"One Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 22:33 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really like you're fic. YOU ROCK!!!
| Reviewed By: dropsofvenus [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 12:38 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10 Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review: You really need to work on your grammar. The punctuation was... awful. And how you explained their reactions and stuff, with all that '-smile-' and stuff... that really ruined it. Sorry, I'm not trying to be mean or anything, but this could've been a lot better XD
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