| "A Time Mixup!" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Hello?
Reviewed By: SilentWillow On: August 30, 2003 17:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Are you planning on continuing with this story any time in the future? I'd really like to see some sort of closure, even if it's only quick. |
Reviewed By: Stardog On: July 01, 2002 12:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story do far, hope you continue.
but for the love of kami, use word wrap. |
Reviewed By: Scotty 2010 On: March 20, 2002 07:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This one i like, and id like to know what happens next so i hope the next chapters will be up soon |
Reviewed By: Greymalkin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2002 01:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's good, keep writing i really want to read more. |
Reviewed By: wolfaxis On: June 27, 2002 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLease continue this is very good. Very Very good. |
Reviewed By: angelryodo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2002 17:41 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like hte fiv every thing is okay but trunks in this story is too strong and what makes a story real good is when they have a struggle.with trunks that powerful it makes your story soo simple but other than that your story is good. |
