| "Lovely" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2002 06:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
cool you combined them :D and Adam & Luka are funny. they remind me of me and my sister.
plz put up more soon,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: Mystic_blue [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2002 23:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay well i was having trouble with this fic so i am re-posting it deleting the old one. okay, sorry. and thanks for reviewing. |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2002 19:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
o i forgot to say: love this fic plzplzplz put up more soon. and also do make it a vegetable/bloomer fic...then again she is 16 now aint she.well thats gonna make it weird
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2002 19:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Miko better not have done anything with veggie. and you know ch.2 really sucks. its not even half a page and how come Bulma dosent know veggie? is it cause shes 16 again?
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: veggies grl On: April 11, 2002 19:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
vegeta better not have did nething with her! and that was just harsh of him to say he wanted to be with her. how could he do that to poor bulma!?!nehoo, great fic. keep it up. i agree though. make it a b/v fic |
Reviewed By: cynthia On: March 12, 2002 03:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
could you please make this a b/v fanfic.the story is great |
Reviewed By: Dream On: March 11, 2002 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your fic. Do continue! |
