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| "Chasing the Truth" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] | Reviewed By: YGO Cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 01:45 CDT
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Don't worry it happens to all of us, but I'm too stubborn to let my stories die, as you well know. Well, good luck for any future fics in mind. Jaa-ne!
| Title: hi
Reviewed By: Chemical On: December 06, 2006 17:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good please update soon
| Title: -_-....
Reviewed By: YGO Cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 00:55 CST
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Would you just start the chapter already!!! It's not fair that you kept me hanging like that, and it was getting so good! *cries*
| Title: Calm down!
Reviewed By: YGO Cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 00:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey fav. reviewer! I know the first fics could be a little... can't think of a word, but, your fic is doing great. You just need to work on your chapters a bit. If I were you, and you can do this in your free time anywhere, I bring a notebook or some thing that you can write in so you could do a 'rough draft' of your story and just type it up when you think that it's ready. It really helps, trust me on this. Okay.
| Reviewed By: Kincses [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, please write another chapter...or two...or ten...^_^
| Reviewed By: SomeRandomBastard On: May 13, 2006 16:48 CDT
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The fic is interesting, and I hope to watch it grow and develope, however, I have some words of advise. Stop with the gods damned cliffys after every chapter. Okay, maybe that's unavoidable, but what you Can do is save all your comments for before and after the chapter. Also try and legthen them out a bit, and don't be afraid to flesh it in. I understand how difficult writing a nice sized chapter can be, but try and get a rough idea of what you want to happen later in the fic, and how the events in the chapter are going to lead up to it. Don't worry, not every chapter has to be thought out at great length. Mindless fuzzyness is great as well, just don't let it take over the fic. My, this is geting long, I'll hurry up. Slow down with Yugi and Yami. No matter how sweet and trusting Yugi is, Yami will probably be less naive, and less likely to let down all his defences, unless he's been surviving on pure luck. Most hunted people don't trust others easly because others are more often then not, trying to kill them. And you might want to go over the hows, whys, and whatnots of what looks to be Yami killing a bunch of people and dragging the corpses into a secluded section of the forest. Last thing, I promise. Whats up with Yugi? He sences the 'bad feelings' coming from Yami's Stack O' Corpses, and manages to toss Yami, and keep said Vamp on his toes. Is Yami that young or whimpy of a vampire? Or is Yugi something more. Meh. Anywho, not bad, keep trying, and if you don't want me to review anymore, say so, and I'll leave you and your fic alone.
| Reviewed By: Daisuke14 (com won't let me sign in) [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 08:13 CDT
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-sucks on Sugar Daddy- O.O MOREMOREMOREMORE!!!! AND MORE SUGAR!!! -bounces around the room, then collapses in coughing fit-
| Title: Thanks!
Reviewed By: xXDarkLightXx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 18:30 CDT
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THANKS FOR REVIEWING!!! YOU ALL ROCK!!! W00T!!! *gives more sugar and goes craZ cause she already had sugar!!!*
| Reviewed By: LokiVsAnubis [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 00:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it so please write more soon. I love how your so to the point please update soon!!!
| Reviewed By: FelicityCherub On: March 26, 2006 22:07 CST
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Yay! *claps happily* I like the fic so far ^___^ very good *heart* I can't wait to read more *happily chews on her sugar*
| Reviewed By: Daisuke14 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 18:50 CST
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um, just so you know, if you had put all six chapters together, it would still be a little short, so no, you're not rushing through, you're inching through.
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