Title: FFRG Review
Reviewed By: Wolf in the Night [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 00:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you for submitting to FFRG! I enjoyed this little one-shot of your's. It kind of seems out of character for Duo in how he thinks, but his speech is very much like him. It was very romantic. It had me smiling at the end. ^^ Though, I think it's best to warn your audience it isn't something for new comers to the series should read, as it has specialized vocabulary that some may not understand unless veterans of the show. There was some repetition, like with how "lover" came up. I didn't see hardly any spelling, grammar, etc. errors. This was small and sweet. I found it very enjoyable. Thank you, once again for submitting to FFRG! We hope to hear from you again soon!
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