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| "Balance of Power" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 › » ] | Reviewed By: Lawnchair Jesus On: April 22, 2009 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading this when it was first uploaded to this site, and I was addicted to it after reading the first sentence of the first chapter. I must say, the author has a damn creative mind.
| Reviewed By: Uniasus (not logged in) On: January 31, 2009 18:37 CST
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Gah, I can't believe you ended it like that! But at least you're planning more. Will it be tacked on to this one as more chapters or a different story entirely? I expected all of them to go through the Gate, but for it to be hanging in mid air--not quite so much. And I do love all the pop culture references in this story, though I don't know if I would classify High Noon as such. Its too...old. But still good. As much as I love you for updating two chapters....I really want another one and hate the fact that its no where in sight.
| Title: Fae Gem Whiteberry
Reviewed By: Kae_Mustang [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2008 23:20 CDT
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But, Den isn't a girl . . . huh?
| Reviewed By: graypheonix85 On: June 29, 2008 05:31 CDT
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Damn. It's been a long time to an update, but the wait has been more than worth it. Awesome couple of chapters, and it only makes me want to read more. Update again soon, ja ne.
| Reviewed By: Uniasus (not logged in) On: May 21, 2008 20:45 CDT
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Hmm, I never seem to be logged in. Wonderful two chapters again, as always. I'm up past my bedtime from reading them ^_~. I always knew that Ed would meet this Maes sometime in the story, but I guess I also expected it to have....a bigger role in the plot. Who knows, maybe it will. Never expected Ducky to be an Elric though. It was also kinda of funny to see Maes Elric acting more grown up then Ed, and I feel like Maes didn't get all his questions about Ed answered. Poor bloke. Maybe Ducky can fill him in later.
| Reviewed By: Uniasus (not logged in) On: February 02, 2008 22:14 CST
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NOOO!!!! Edo!!!!!!!!!!! I was totally waiting for them to go back, but I must admit the 'part one' that was at the beginning of each chapter had me curious as to what part two was. But I had expected for the scene here to be at the end of the second part with a happy ending! Ed! *sniff* And, as always, very nicely done ^_~
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 13:47 CST
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This story is amazing. And long as hell to reread. THanks for updating, and please don't take as long to do so in the future, ok? Anyway, update soon and all that, ja ne.
| Reviewed By: Uniasus (not logged on) On: December 05, 2007 21:13 CST
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I really don't mind the long update wait at all, it was worth it! Wonderful chapters! So much going one, complex and simple thats its quite a delight to read. Keep writing!
| Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 03:41 CST
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You updated! Oh, thank GOD! When I got the emails--THREE OF THEM!--I literally screamed and fell out of my chair. You have not disappointed your fans! These chapters were more than worth the wait, and thank y'all for not leaving us hanging. xDD Good luck with all of your writing, okay?
| Reviewed By: SnowFlakeAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 20:57 CDT
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Hellooooooo... Is there anyone out there??? You must take pleasure in letting us hang. It's such a great story and you guys are making me think it's going the way that so many other great stories have gone... not finished. Please, don't do that to us!!! All of readers really would like to see how this ends!!!!!
| Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 09:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ok, I have just lost hours upon hours of sleep because I wanted read all the chapters and just finished. You've done great so far, but now you've left me hanging and in my tired state I think I'll go cry. Please keep it up, you have really done an awesome job. I can't wait for the next update (excited squeel here).
| Reviewed By: Moonshadow14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 21:42 CST
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hehheh... I am so incredibly sorry I haven't reviewed before now, but things have been... um... I would say crazy, but that's pretty normal, actually, so maybe hectic? I didn't give up on you though!! but between school and finals and trigonometry and history and family emergencies and friends, I have had no energy left to do more than breath and eat, and trying to stay awake seemed like the seven labors of Hercules. I thought I would be able to get caught up with fanfics over the holidays, but that was just as busy as school because I had to help get everything ready for family, and then we had guests almost the entire break... but anyway, this has no relevancy to you, and you probably don't care and have your own things to worry about. but anyway, I love the new chapters!! ^^ I hope you can update again soon!! ^^ If it makes you feel any better, I missed your story (or that might just scare the crap out of you, either way...)
| Reviewed By: Haywire_Hakaze(ninja-style!) On: October 07, 2006 19:25 CDT
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XD This chapter had me rolling all-throughout. Kudos.
| Title: Oh, I've missed you CBS.
Reviewed By: Child Xylia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 23:20 CDT
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(Hehe, you used "pop" instead of "soda"! The Canadian in me is proud!) Well, THAT was a great chapter. I gotta say that "bundle of sticks" joke had me going for quite some time. =D I love the Al and Gene interaction, as well as one with Ed and Tessa. It's beautiful, I tell you, beautiful! I was really impatient for an update but this was worth it. You've done it again, CBS!
| Reviewed By: Uniasus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 05:37 CDT
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Oh dear! I just love Ed.
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