Title: =) Reviewed By: Acire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 20:13 CDT Comment/Review: Hehe, you already know what I think of this chapter but I felt that I had to review anywayz. ^^ And lookie here, you didn't use 'said' all the time! I'm so proud! Yeah, some grammar issues but definetly better than how it originally was. But, nothing that can't be worked on! Keep it up! Update soon, please!
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