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| "The Old, The Young, The Bastard, and the Brat" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: insanechildfanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 19:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Um...not bad. I like where your going with this. Especially with Tatsura and Shuichi deciding to make thier lovers pay, by getting together...wonder how long it'll take them to crack...aw well
| Title: Cute
Reviewed By: Assassin of the Shadows [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 15:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gotta admit, though I've seen this kind of plot before, I love your own little twists! This is cute, and it's sounding interesting. Hell, it's got me hooked on the first chapter waiting to see when more is coming! So keep your words and bring the second chapter out soon! -Aots
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