| "Paper Flowers" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: master
Reviewed By: billy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 06:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the way the fic is going ive never read a fic quite like it all to many are the same generic story with little to no creativity i hope to read more soon
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am SO glad you were able to continue with your story. I have never read one like it before and am very happy you continued. I was wondering if/when Sesshomaru was going to make his appearance. Was pleased, too, that Rin is in it as well. The amount of emotion you have shown thus far from the characters is amazing. Inu showing a part of himself he probably never has to her yet unable to tell her anything...yet. You have an excellent story line going on here and cant wait to see whats gonna happen next. Update when you can. :D
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 13:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
i really like this story. i like the plot, it's very different from anything i've read before. keep up the good work. and please update soon!
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Title: Not Dropped I Hope...
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so hope you didnt drop this story. It is really good what you have thus far and I would hate too see it abandoned. I'll just keep checking back for updates.
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Reviewed By: Myr On: April 27, 2006 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story and the concept keep it up! I love the little points which make this story unique.
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 15:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
So sad but Inuyasha is being so sweet and supportive. Please update soon.
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Title: witches!?
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2006 07:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm very happy that someone recommended this on list cause I'd have missed out. I'm sure this will be huge by the end of the story, so you keep ahold of your muse, feed her lots of chocolate and cookies, so we can see more of this very nice story soon. AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH *goes running off to make peach cobbler*
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 11:23 CST
Comment/Review:
You aluded to the fact that Inuyasha knows why the mikos have been targeted, but then there was no follow through. The prologue is a real attention grabber, but this first chapter doesn't hold it as easily. Perhaps throwing the reader another bone or two of background info. OTOH the bit of IY and Kag fluff was nice. Right at the start we know how they feel about one another. There won't be any of the does he/doesn't he stuff. Good. Thanks for writing for us! Caitriona
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Title: Prologue
Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 11:12 CST
Comment/Review:
What a terribly dark AU it looks like you have started here. What has happened for the practice of crucifiction to have been brought back around. ewww. Your writing style is rivetting - depending on where you go with this fic, it looks like it could be a good one. Thanks for writing for us Caitriona
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 21:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting, I like it so far and can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon! ^_^
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 22:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this is most intriguing. Going fic-hunting is turning up some good ones lately. I see you had this at another site? Don't know where, but am glad you brought it here. Think this is the first one I've read like this thus far. Great story, great style. You're a really good story teller. I really do like this piece. Update when you can.
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