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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 11:30 CST
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Well, I'm one of those people that you've picked up along the way. I can't even tell you how much I enjoyed your story...even in spite of some minor spelling and grammar errors (if you knew me, that would tell you how much I loved it!). There are a lot of stories out there that end up with Kagome and Inuyasha sharing thoughts and emotions somehow, but I've never read one that was quite as realistic--it didn't solve all of their problems and sometimes caused more. Then again, what worth is anything that you don't have to work for? =) Like great stories, perhaps? Thanks for sticking with this long enough for me to see it, and even more thanks for seeing it through to the end! I was amazed at how complete it truly was, even without actually getting to all the stuff hanging over Kagome's head--after all, none of that was what the story was really about. I hope you keep writing, in whatever medium you choose, and that someday I'll read something that moves me and wonder if it was you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 19:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story... really liked it... full of drama and action... lots of emotions too... glad for the happy ending... good job... great work...
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Title: thanks for replying
Reviewed By: ObsessedInuyashaFan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 03:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanks for replying and finally updating and finishing this. much appreciated. very good. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: 13RedRoses [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 22:35 CST
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This is like the BEST fanfiction that I've read in a while. I love, love, love this. The characters were in charater and it just entertained me so much. I hope you right some more Inu/Kag fanfics that are just exciting or even more exciting then this one.
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Reviewed By: szyszka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really really reallly like it:) you have some greate talent:) i will be waiting for youe other stories.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 12:26 CST
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Hi PG. Glad you finished this here, so that it's done on both sites. This is, without a doubt one of my absolute favorite stories. Wonderful characterization, pacing, tension. Loved every minute of it. Will you be writing other stories? Please don't stop, your talent deserves to be shown, and we love to read it!
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Title: update
Reviewed By: ObsessedInuyashaFan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 03:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its been way too long since you updated this. please continue. like.. now. please.
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Title: Chapters 1-18
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 17:16 CDT
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Hey there! This is actually a review for Chapters 1-17 here on MM.org and Chapter 18 of your story "The World Through His Eyes" that was posted on FF.net I'd review it normally but for some reason on FF.net it says that I've already reviewed a chapter 18 before and here on MM.org it hasn't been posted yet. Personally I prefer MM.org. ^^ Anyways, I'm so glad to see that you're back and writing. I reread the story over from the beginning and I love it just as much as I did when you started it. Chapter 18 was a very informative chapter. Now we know what has to be done to fix the spell and I have no doubt that Inuyasha and Kagome are looking forward to it. ;) It's always nice to see Kagome and Inuyasha stand together as a united front. Finally things seem to be going their way. I am curious to see what Sesshy demands as payment not to mention the intimate scene that Kouga pops into next chapter! Keep up the good work and welcome back! =)
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Reviewed By: sunrisegoodbyes [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 12:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH Update!! Loveing this story!!
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Reviewed By: kagome789 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ALWSOME plz update
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_luvs_kagome_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 17:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update soon ^^ i love your story!
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Reviewed By: Katie Eff On: May 07, 2006 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy your story very much, and hope you will continue it soon. I particularly enjoy your take on the characters of Kikyo and Sesshomaru. I agree with you when you say that neither character is pure evil or evil. Rather Kikyo is very pitiable. You create very real characters and scenes and I hope to see more very soon. Thank you again for such a great story. -Katie
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Title: chapter 6
Reviewed By: tessie(not signed in) On: April 03, 2006 15:08 CDT
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hey can u fix chappter 6? all the words are together..there are no paragraphs at all...makes it hard to read. great stoyr can't wait to read more as soon as chappie 6 is fixed.
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Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 01:19 CDT
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ohhh...update! this story had me flipping. and the cliffie you left...that was mean. you write well, write some more. ^_^
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: March 28, 2006 10:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update as soon as you can. I can't wait to read the rest of this story.
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