"Unbeating Heartache" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Dead_ACPF [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 20:53 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I loved your fanfiction. It is so creative. I always wondered what a alternative Universe fanfic would be like so I tried this one and its so awesome. I'm sure if Yuki were a vampire he would act that way. After years of being alone he probably would of softened. I am so glad and can't wait till chapter 2! See you soon.
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Reviewed By: hot angel from hell On: April 07, 2006 23:21 CDT Comment/Review: i love this story, please continue! oh, and could you do me a favor, when you do update, please email me to let me knoe, at Rrktc7677@aol.com thatnk you
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Reviewed By: chelisa On: March 28, 2006 16:26 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: This sounds like it will be a good story. I would love for you to write more! please? soon? *puppy dog look*
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Reviewed By: dragons017 On: March 27, 2006 17:31 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Hmmm.... intresting...write more....i starting to like this...but need more chapters to comfrim ths. So Write More...please
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