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Reviewed By: too lazy to sign in On: June 07, 2006 01:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was both interesting and well written...though personally if a guy had said someone else's name while we were intimate I would have been a little more offended than Akiko was. Good job keeping it angsty and romantic. - Cochrann
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Reviewed By: Cyndi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 00:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Poor Sesshoumaru...all that waiting only to still not find what he's looking for. Beautiful fic though.
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Reviewed By: the bastard child On: April 08, 2006 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
very beautifully written. it's almost poetic. you have a very skilled way of portraying images. great job. great ending.
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