Reviewed By: brucesgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 08:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At first, when I clicked on the link, I wasn't sure what to expect. Then, I was amazed. Your style of writing is magnificent, and the story line is good. Smut with feeling... it's perfect. And I appreciate the fact that you didn't have them confessing their love to each other in the first three paragraphs. Although we all love Cloud, he's a cold bastard, isn't he? An odd pairing, and an excellent style of writing. GREAT job, hon.
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