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| "Darkness Within" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Anaki Of The Blood Wolves [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is cool, dude, I love the aura thing, but keep it up and update soon!
| Reviewed By: Bruzer On: April 15, 2006 04:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a nice prslogue to a great fanfic xovr, what i liked most was the description of the power as ranma accessed it for the first time. I think it would be good if you tried to involve Mu Tsu and Konatsu as more in-depth characters because of the hidden weapons techniques and the kunoichi genius. Also would be good if ranma happens on the Umi-Sen-ken and Yama-Sen-ken, ryoga should be in the next chapter probly in the middle or end. However you decide to continue the fic is up to you, and any choice you make will be the right one. Xcpt stopping the fic then ill have to sic my hamster on you
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