| "Forever Black-Eyed" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Charming Creep
Reviewed By: Anime10473 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 03:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
CRAP! *curses profusely* I can't believe it! My entire review is GONE! It was my fault! Usally I copy and paste it just in case internet goes wacky but this time I didn't and now it's all GONE!! ....*sighs* Right, well GREAT CHAP!! UPDATE SOON! I agree with Fuu about Insane Ruffian and Charming Creep. I could never forget 'the artist' who painted that Gorgeous pic of Fuu(didn't he get caught and was forced to stay in the town and eventually became a renowned Ukiyou [spelling?] painter or something?). Spelling - I saw one spelling error and you have a very diff. way of saying things - "This weapon. Didn't you come to have such a thing?" - which is fine with me cause I still understand what you mean. --- Well I think that's all of my 'lost' review all summed up. I still can't believed it's gone! It was so long to. *pouts*
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Reviewed By: fallingaway... On: April 23, 2006 18:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Its me again lol :D i really like your story! Most of my Pal who are also into mugen+Fuu like it too! keep it up!! Ps. Please update as fast as humanly possible thank you!!!
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Reviewed By: fallingaway... On: April 20, 2006 22:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
AHH! i love it!!!!! please keep going please??! [: i just love fuu and mugen pairings they go so well together and they look so cute together as well! i dont care what anyone else thinks!! lol Please update as soon as possible!!
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Title: More!
Reviewed By: CuriousRiz On: March 29, 2006 16:28 CST
Comment/Review:
I likey! I luv Fuu and Mugen! She's so cute and he's such an ass! Though you didn't have a beta it wasn't 'that' messy. You had some spelling errors and some of the word phrasing needs to be changed and I think your missing one or two commas but all in all it's very good. Okay I reviewed UPDATE Please!!
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