| "Be Without You" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Subtle Serenity On: July 06, 2006 22:10 CDT
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Ohh! This has the makings of a very interesting story! Hmm..what happened to Kaggy two years ago? Was it the same that happened to Inu? Poor Inu...it's not his fault kinky hoe-uh....Kikyo was such a bitch to him! (>-
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Reviewed By: Fairytalechic1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 01:13 CDT
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i haven't been back in a while. came to check on your story, still no update? :{ i'll be waiting patiently, can't wait to see what happens next!!
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Reviewed By: cwillia On: April 11, 2006 01:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really intrested in seeing were the story goes. UPDATE Pleease and soon.
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Reviewed By: cwillia On: April 09, 2006 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm an older fan and I like your style. Sorry the story hasn't gotten many reviews it sounds like it will be great. So please update for those of us who do appreciate you.
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: Fairytalechic1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 02:22 CDT
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The beginning of this story is very charming. I thought how everyone introduced themselves before dinner was funny. Was it suppose to be? Either way I enjoyed that part. Keep on writing! Can't wait for review.
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Reviewed By: Kerica On: April 01, 2006 13:33 CST
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I liked this first chapter, but I don't think that you needed to introduce the characters like that. I think you should of left their names and jobs secret until they met the people again at another time, because who introduces themselves to waitresses? I think that it would be more realistic (I am aware thet I'm critiquing an inu yasha fan fic, how realistic is that?) if the two boys introduced themselves after dinner. all in all, I like the concept, keep up the good work Kerica
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Title: Good story
Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 16:37 CST
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Hey! Update! It's a good story. I like how you brought Inuyasha and kagome together. Keep on updating. ~aryanna~
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Title: GinaCat
Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 14:35 CST
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I really like this story I can't wait till you update again
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