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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 08:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like your choice of location. But why would anyone chose anywhere near the DVP(Don Valley Parking lot,um I mean Parkway). There are a lot of other places in the GTA(Greater Toronto Area). Actually, if you want traffic tie ups in your story that is the place to be. Looking forward to your choice of venue for the concert as well as Yuki and Shuichi finially meeting up.Enough stalling. Later.
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Reviewed By: Lisa K On: June 29, 2006 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Showers of accolades! I'm of the opinion that if an author writes very good then it doesn't matter how OCC or AU the fic is. You write very good. Thank you. I am looking forward (that's putting it mildly) to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Kate13 On: June 27, 2006 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You go Eiri Yuki! I've been waiting for him to make his move and Ryuichi really needs a good smack in the face! I am loving this story because I'm such a sucker for the angst. Can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: m y s t i c e On: June 26, 2006 03:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! cliffhanger! aarrgh! \anyway, i like this story.. Poor Shuichi... update soon, ok?
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. It's about time Yuki takes action. Looking forward to your next chapter. Later
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Title: GAH!
Reviewed By: AngelofLight (not signed in) On: June 21, 2006 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAH! SOP GOOD! THE SUSPENSE! THE DRAMA! EEEEEEE! it's killin' me here! Ryu is one confused little bunny, but Eiri now has his chance! Hurray! Can't wait to see how this turns out! DUN DUN DUN!
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Reviewed By: gravilove19 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 12:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ZOMG!!! I can't wait for your next update. Great job!!
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Reviewed By: Raina26 On: June 15, 2006 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool chapter, so glad to see you had added another chapter to one of my fav stories. Very curious to see what happens next. I miss you over on Adult Fan, hopefully I'll see you over there one.
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Reviewed By: Lisa kc On: June 08, 2006 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very very good story. I love the "hasn't been beat to death plot." You have a good solid writing style. So in a nut shell - I love this story! I hope you continue with it - i.e. please don't leave us hanging. Thanks for sharing.
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Title: Update!!
Reviewed By: gravilove19 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 08:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay an update, I really do enjoy this fic, I haven't seen one like this in a while. I hope you will be inspired to update soon. Thanks ^-^
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Title: Update!!
Reviewed By: gravilove19 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 08:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay an update, I really do enjoy this fic, I haven't seen one like this in a while. I hope you will be inspired to update soon. Thanks ^-^
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well done!Nice addition to a pretty good start to a story.I really enjoy reading your work. I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Lady-Loss On: May 11, 2006 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter, I love it when Yuki is the one persuing Shu. Loving the way your story is going, hope you update soon. Also 'Because of You'. I love both stories. Ja ne for now.
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Reviewed By: Maria [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 15:10 CDT
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Yay! Another chappie. Evil Ryu... hope his kuma-chan rots. No one hurts Shuichi.. Cranky novelist to the rescue. Tatsuha and Ryu are conniving snakes and deserve each other. Shuichi and Yuki deserve each other. And I still want to see someone put a foot in Tatsuha for messing with a married personage. Ramble done.
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Reviewed By: Ashcat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 12:50 CDT
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Chpt 4: Thank you for answering my question :) I am glad to know what happened with Ask. I am really excited to see where you take this story - and its an interesting twist that Shuichi is feeling so numb, I can't wait to see how you elaborate on why he is feeling that way and the effects. It will almost be a role reversal for him and Eiri now that shu will be the one who is hurt and jaded/untrusting after Ryu cheats on him again.
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