| "What Might Be" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: NekoKaru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was excellent, indeed. I like the way you ended it, and agree with you on those points about characters with too much power. The "might happen in the future" has me excited...that was a great story, and a sequel sounds fun^^
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Reviewed By: NekoKaru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 23:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
...okay, I'm a crackhead who can't read update dates >.> So forget the part about "hasn't been updated in a while" ^^;
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Reviewed By: NekoKaru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a really enjoyable story. It's a shame that it hasn't been updated in a while...I'm quite anxious to find out what happens next. You've got some interesting ideas, and I like your writing style. Keep it up and update some time, yeah? I can't wait to see if Akira ever meets his guardian angel
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Reviewed By: Shingai-Naka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 00:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved reading "What Might Be." The time seemed to pass quickly, but in a way that made it appealing. Though, like you said, the idea did not com from you the way you wrote made a different story from the one you based it off of. What I really wish to know is wether this fanfic is actually finished or not? I can't help but want to see more happen and while you did leave on a good note, I just want to see how Naruto continues living and if he speaks with the boy again(or anything more if you know what I mean ^-^). I also found it adorable how Akira kept calling him "Mr. Spooky."
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Reviewed By: NNCS [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2006 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dear lord did I love this! very interesting POV you had going on here...and I loved the feel you had to the entire fic (it is over...right?), nice and melencholy. and the end made me go "Oh my God, what the hell happened?!" I loved it how I never saw it coming!
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