| "Hourglass" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Relaxing Pikachu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2007 04:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find this story has a lot of potential. It's a shame that you left it off in the way that you did. As I said on the board in the "pic a fic" topic, the writing style is great to me, and the description is also nice. It's not overwhelming or anything. It has a nice balance of dialogue and description. I can't wait to take a look at your other works.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 20:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hope they kill Naraku in time to save Miroku!
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Reviewed By: Kera-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I've been waiting for someone to write a fic that's up to date with the manga. What a bonus that it's about the Shouki wounds! I like your alternate ending to the battle with the yama-arashi. It proves to have more Sango and Miroku moments. I hope you update soon, this fic is starting out great!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 14:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, I've never read the manga, but it's sad to read that Miroku is dying. He can't die just yet, Sango still has to bear his children; she said she would after all lol.
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Reviewed By: kamackie21 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 11:28 CDT
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Ooooo....I am intrigued. And no, the retelling of the manga wasn't boring at all. It flowed very well. Good to see you writing again Baka.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 19:53 CST
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Wow, you already got me hooked, Baka lol. Can't wait to read more of this story! And of course you start the story off wonderfully and leave it, as always, at a cliff hanger! CURSE YOU! Lol.
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