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| "Legend Of Zelda Wind Waker: The Tale Of Two Love Birds" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: Nice work, but needs work
Reviewed By: Francesca Marsch On: July 12, 2012 00:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the LinkxMedli! They're my gave LoZ pairing of all time, but they're super hard to find fanfiction for. The plot is great, but the execution is flawed. I wish you would have found another way to annotate the telepathy or at least have put a line between POVs. Rather than saying start flashback, end flashback, etc. you could have used a simple 'Link reminisced upon....' then said what you wanted to say. No offense, but your capitalization and punctuation was god-awful. When I first saw the story, I thought "Ugh. This is some twelve yr old girl who got a hold of her big brother's old Gamecube game and now thinks she an expert." I kept reading though because I try not to judge books by their covers. If you to taken seriously in the big leagues (fanfiction.net), then you've gotta handle that. I don't mean to be so critical, but I'm a sophomore English major at NYU, so critiquing writing is second nature to me. On a good note, I really admire your audacity. TetraxKomali blew me away because a read a LOT of fanfic and I've actually never seen that before. I've never seen little Aryll with anyone either so I thought that was pretty cute, too. All in all, a good effort but your inexperience shows in the technicalities. Check out Legend of Zelda: Only Chosen Love on fanfiction.net! It is the absolute best LoZ FF I've ever seen and I think you have that kind of potential. Keep at it :) | Title: Very..... i cant remember the word at the moment lol
Reviewed By: Tsuyoi (AKA Brian) On: July 13, 2010 02:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am not good at writing reviews on writings, so please forgive my vagueness The first thing I liked about this: You made it so he was mute, that made me smile the second: It has my favorite Wind Waker pairing I find this great to read i told you I suck at reviewing writings XD
| Reviewed By: outlawstar00000 On: May 29, 2009 11:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome fic a perfect 10 believable yet very original u should really post this on fanfiction.net its the best zelda fic ive ever read and believe me ive read alot of them
| Reviewed By: raiden54 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 20:29 EDT
Comment/Review:
*sigh* no one wants to review today.
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