| "The Gift Within" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan(Not logged in) On: August 01, 2006 19:57 CDT
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Ahhhhhh!!!! Duo is going to be raped!! Noo!!! -sobs- Anyway. This is cool really. Interesting, really. I just have to wonder about Heero's personality issues. Is the current personality going to fade away entirely? Or are the two personalities going to merge to make a new Heero? I have read a fic about two souls in the same body, and they allways have problems with the personality thing. I just think that you should think about that if you already haven't. There is one thing that is bothering me though. The clothing. You have made no move to describe any of the clothing besides the black coat that Duo has. Just weird if you ask me. It sort of reminds me of the dress that was worn in the early 18 hundreds, don't ask me how. Anyway, this is great. I am still pissed at the fact that you obviously made Zechs rape Duo. Ahhh #@$&. >< I have to see how this is going to end. Put up another chapter soon please! Ja!
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 06:28 CDT
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::jumps up and down in excitement:: And then, and then!! Please don't leave me hangin'. Lol great story can't wait to see the update.
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Reviewed By: demonsbaby On: April 18, 2006 08:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is interesting.it is different in a strange way. I guess it will make more sense as it is written. but please write more soon.
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Reviewed By: Codan On: April 18, 2006 05:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story, the names were a little confusing at first, I thought Fayte was Relena OOC at first. I really like this story but please don't make Knight just a replacement for Tsuzuki in Heero's heart because that would be so sad!
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